Research And Planning: Update to trailer

I am now going to change the ending of my trailer. After speaking to Angela, I agree with her feedback that the end of the trailer seems like its setting a location again and it doesn't get to that final stage where it shocks everyone. The beginning is fine, it sets the narrative and then we're introduced to the main character a bit in different scenes but there's no final push to shock people. As a result of this, I'm going to shoot some more footage/take individual pictures for a montage effect towards the end to build up the tension. This may be difficult though since Angela is busy for the rest of the week, then it's half term. I will have to start planning what ideas I could have.