This is the first draft of my magazine and I'm not impressed at the moment. I think that the skulls at the bottom make it look really unprofessional. In addition, I think without the test shots, it's really difficult to imagine whether the layout will work or not. I like the effect of the writing 'The Unseen' and how it fades out in places, but I'm unsure if it will work once a picture is beneath it and whether the picture will drown it out. I also feel that the title and the top part of the page looks too plain, although which a picture, this could change.
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